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The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2023 7:30 pm
by goatmeal
Below is a link to the abridged story of "Betrayal In Antara."

http://larrylaffer.net/non-lsl-games/th ... df-version




Version 1.38 (updated)

It's abridged because the game is an RPG, and like most RPGs, the player encounters repetitive text (eating / sleeping / fighting / losing / winning / fast travel / "no one home" / "closed for the evening" / etc.) that doesn't contribute much to the overall story.

Instead, I chose to focus on the main story and the various side quests & story interactions the player can encounter, turning it into a novel format (novel here meaning "book length," not "interestingly new or unusual") rather than simply an extracted list of all text data.

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The PDF contains the following sections:

• An introduction of how the document came to be, and the reasoning behind the choices made in its creation

• An enhanced game map of Antara (for those following along at home)

• Writing credits for the game, plus the quick "primer" on the world of Antara from the game manual

• The story of the game, divided into chapters (and includes my "fan-fiction enhancements" for the cutscenes)

• A list of the game items with their various descriptions

• The lyrics to the game's tavern songs

• Unused text found within the game files, along with my commentary

• Explanations for references found within the game, as well as fun facts

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And because the document is so long, the table of content contains direct links to each of these sections.

Click the line in the Table of Contents >>> Go directly to that page

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Hope you enjoy. Whew!!! -- After 11 years, it's been quite the project.

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2023 7:13 pm
by Tawmis
Posted it to LarryLaffer.net too.
http://larrylaffer.net/archives/4903

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2023 7:32 pm
by goatmeal
Tawmis wrote: Sun Nov 05, 2023 7:13 pm Posted it to LarryLaffer.net too.
http://larrylaffer.net/archives/4903
Excellent. Thank you so much, Tawmis -- the page looks great! :)

Might need to update in the near future. Under the Reference/Fun Facts section, I failed to include that one of the game's writers, Cynthia Vanous, was an actual character in the game: in Ticor Province for Chapters 2 & 4, Cynthia Vanous is the Ravenne Museum Curator...

Came to mind just as I was uploading... :roll:

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2023 8:43 pm
by goatmeal
Version 1.1 should be uploaded tonight.

Thank you for your patience. :)

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2023 4:23 am
by Tawmis

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2023 7:49 am
by goatmeal
Tawmis wrote: Fri Nov 17, 2023 4:23 am Posted on LSL:
http://larrylaffer.net/archives/4913
Thank you! :)

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2023 7:55 pm
by goatmeal
Version 1.2 has been submitted to Tawmis to post at the top of this thread.

The major change is now there is a Version Update log at the end, which also includes where the most recent version of the PDF can be found. There are also some minor changes, and I revised the "fan fiction/enhanced " cutscenes yet again. The writing has been cleaned up to make my contributions flow better.

Thank you for your interest in this project. :)

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2023 8:46 pm
by Tawmis

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2023 8:04 am
by goatmeal
Tawmis wrote: Mon Dec 18, 2023 8:46 pm http://larrylaffer.net/archives/4964
Thanks, Tawmis!

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2023 11:43 am
by Tawmis
Created a page for it on the LSL site, under the "Non LSL Games" section.

http://larrylaffer.net/non-lsl-games/th ... df-version

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2023 7:10 pm
by goatmeal
Tawmis wrote: Wed Dec 20, 2023 11:43 am Created a page for it on the LSL site, under the "Non LSL Games" section.

http://larrylaffer.net/non-lsl-games/th ... df-version
Thanks, Tawmis!

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2024 8:36 pm
by goatmeal
Version 1.3 has been submitted to Tawmis for posting at the top of this thread.

This update consists of minor changes and revisions -- mostly of proofreading, better word flow, and correcting typos/misspellings/missing words that I've discovered over the last month or so. :oops:

Thank you for your interest in this project. :)

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2024 9:10 pm
by Tawmis
Version 3 is on Larry Laffer's site:
http://larrylaffer.net/non-lsl-games/th ... df-version

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2024 6:43 am
by goatmeal
Tawmis wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 9:10 pm Version 3 is on Larry Laffer's site:
http://larrylaffer.net/non-lsl-games/th ... df-version
Thank you, Tawmis! :)

Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2024 4:54 pm
by Tawmis
goatmeal wrote: Thu Feb 08, 2024 6:43 am
Tawmis wrote: Mon Feb 05, 2024 9:10 pm Version 3 is on Larry Laffer's site:
http://larrylaffer.net/non-lsl-games/th ... df-version
Thank you, Tawmis! :)
Dude, with how long that document is - thank you for doing amazing work.