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Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Wed Jun 05, 2024 3:09 pm
by Tawmis
goatmeal wrote: ↑Tue Jun 04, 2024 11:03 pm
Tawmis wrote: ↑Tue Jun 04, 2024 10:35 pm
Uploaded to LSL, and updated first post.
Thank you, Tawmis!
Anytime! You did all the hard work.
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2024 6:39 pm
by goatmeal
Version 1.50 has been submitted to Tawmis for posting at the top of this thread.
Looks like I spoke too soon!
There is an interaction in Chapter 4 that has always been temperamental: a man hiding from the Imperial Guard in Varnasse. It doesn't work more often than not, and because of its unreliability, I chose to place it in the Unused Text Section.
However, while playing a minimal run through of Chapter 3 to re-test this interaction in Chapter 4, I discovered the condition for another alternate "unused" message to appear in Chapter 3 (!): Kaelyn commenting on the picked locks in Ticoro instead of Aren.
I was able to trigger the Chapter 4 interaction as well, so both have been moved to their proper places within the main story; several revisions/updates and two new "References and Fun Facts" were also added...
(And from now on, no more grand statements of any update being 'the last update.' This project will continue to be updated as warranted.)
Thank you for your interest in this project.
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2024 9:34 pm
by Tawmis
First post and file updated here and on LSL
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2024 8:19 am
by goatmeal
Tawmis wrote: ↑Wed Jun 12, 2024 9:34 pm
First post and file updated here and on LSL
Thank you, Tawmis!
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2024 5:21 pm
by Tawmis
I look forward to the next "final" draft.
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2024 9:01 pm
by goatmeal
Tawmis wrote: ↑Thu Jun 13, 2024 5:21 pm
I look forward to the next "final" draft.
A big, Homer Simpson-sized "Doh!"
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Fri Nov 01, 2024 5:54 pm
by goatmeal
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Version 1.52 has been submitted to Tawmis for posting at the top of this thread.
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Wow! I can't believe it's been a whole year since I first released my silly little "Betrayal In Antara" project (a culmination in itself of work over the previous 12 years!).
Add to that, this post thread has received over 12,000 views in that time! Of course, half of those views are probably web-crawling spiderbots for search engines and internet archive sites, while the other half are me posting my update notices...
Many thanks to all who have taken the time to read this PDF document, and I hope you enjoyed it.
This version includes the following updates for the Expanded Cutscene sections (Prologue/Chapter Starts & Ends/Epilogue):
• Correctly denoted part of sentence as not being original text (Ch 7 End)
• Corrected game text transcription typo ("and" to "a") (Chapter 7 End)
• Various further editorial revisions throughout these Expanded Cutscenes
This document can also be found at the Larry Laffer website:
www.larrylaffer.net
And as always, thank you for your interest in this project.
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2024 2:05 am
by Tawmis
goatmeal wrote: ↑Fri Nov 01, 2024 5:54 pm
========================================
Version 1.52 has been submitted to Tawmis for posting at the top of this thread.
========================================
Wow! I can't believe it's been a whole year since I first released my silly little "Betrayal In Antara" project (a culmination in itself of work over the previous 12 years!).
Add to that, this post thread has received over 12,000 views in that time! Of course, half of those views are probably web-crawling spiderbots for search engines and internet archive sites, while the other half are me posting my update notices...
Many thanks to all who have taken the time to read this PDF document, and I hope you enjoyed it.
This version includes the following updates for the Expanded Cutscene sections (Prologue/Chapter Starts & Ends/Epilogue):
• Correctly denoted part of sentence as not being original text (Ch 7 End)
• Corrected game text transcription typo ("and" to "a") (Chapter 7 End)
• Various further editorial revisions throughout these Expanded Cutscenes
This document can also be found at the Larry Laffer website:
www.larrylaffer.net
And as always, thank you for your interest in this project.
Did ye PM it to me? I don't see anywhere to grab the update?
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2024 10:55 am
by goatmeal
Tawmis wrote: ↑Sat Nov 02, 2024 2:05 am
Did ye PM it to me? I don't see anywhere to grab the update?
Ugh, as many times as I goof this up, you'd think I'd learn by now...
...Nope, 'cause I'm a dummy!
(Has a message composed and everything, but I guess I didn't send it last night.)
Just sent you the PM. Thanks for your help.
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2024 12:46 am
by Tawmis
goatmeal wrote: ↑Sat Nov 02, 2024 10:55 am
Tawmis wrote: ↑Sat Nov 02, 2024 2:05 am
Did ye PM it to me? I don't see anywhere to grab the update?
Ugh, as many times as I goof this up, you'd think I'd learn by now...
...Nope, 'cause I'm a dummy!
(Has a message composed and everything, but I guess I didn't send it last night.)
Just sent you the PM. Thanks for your help.
First post updated and LSL site updated.
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2024 3:52 pm
by goatmeal
Tawmis wrote: ↑Sun Nov 03, 2024 12:46 am
First post updated and LSL site updated.
Thank you, Tawmis!
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Mon Nov 04, 2024 1:53 am
by Tawmis
goatmeal wrote: ↑Sun Nov 03, 2024 3:52 pm
Tawmis wrote: ↑Sun Nov 03, 2024 12:46 am
First post updated and LSL site updated.
Thank you, Tawmis!
Sure! I love the... what is it now...
fifth "final" update?
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Mon Nov 04, 2024 8:24 am
by goatmeal
Tawmis wrote: ↑Mon Nov 04, 2024 1:53 am
Sure! I love the... what is it now...
fifth "final" update?
Hey, now.
Make fun of me all you want because I don't know how to send private messages, but back on June 12, 2024, I
clearly stated that there will be no more "final updates" for this project:
goatmeal wrote: ↑Wed Jun 12, 2024 6:39 pm
(And from now on, no more grand statements of any update being 'the last update.' This project will continue to be updated as warranted.)
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Mon Nov 04, 2024 12:35 pm
by Tawmis
goatmeal wrote: ↑Mon Nov 04, 2024 8:24 am
Tawmis wrote: ↑Mon Nov 04, 2024 1:53 am
Sure! I love the... what is it now...
fifth "final" update?
Hey, now.
Make fun of me all you want because I don't know how to send private messages, but back on June 12, 2024, I
clearly stated that there will be no more "final updates" for this project:
goatmeal wrote: ↑Wed Jun 12, 2024 6:39 pm
(And from now on, no more grand statements of any update being 'the last update.' This project will continue to be updated as warranted.)
Re: The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF
Posted: Mon Nov 04, 2024 4:38 pm
by Rath Darkblade
goatmeal wrote: ↑Thu Jun 13, 2024 9:01 pm
Tawmis wrote: ↑Thu Jun 13, 2024 5:21 pm
I look forward to the next "final" draft.
A big, Homer Simpson-sized "Doh!"
You mean this?
