The Abridged Story of "Betrayal In Antara" PDF

[Tawmis]

Uploaded to LSL, and updated first post.

Thank you, Tawmis!

Anytime! You did all the hard work.

[goatmeal]

Version 1.50 has been submitted to Tawmis for posting at the top of this thread.

Looks like I spoke too soon!

There is an interaction in Chapter 4 that has always been temperamental: a man hiding from the Imperial Guard in Varnasse. It doesn't work more often than not, and because of its unreliability, I chose to place it in the Unused Text Section.

However, while playing a minimal run through of Chapter 3 to re-test this interaction in Chapter 4, I discovered the condition for another alternate "unused" message to appear in Chapter 3 (!): Kaelyn commenting on the picked locks in Ticoro instead of Aren.

I was able to trigger the Chapter 4 interaction as well, so both have been moved to their proper places within the main story; several revisions/updates and two new "References and Fun Facts" were also added...

(And from now on, no more grand statements of any update being 'the last update.' This project will continue to be updated as warranted.)

Thank you for your interest in this project.

[Tawmis]

First post and file updated here and on LSL

[goatmeal]

First post and file updated here and on LSL

Thank you, Tawmis!

[Tawmis]

I look forward to the next "final" draft.

[goatmeal]

I look forward to the next "final" draft.

A big, Homer Simpson-sized "Doh!"

[goatmeal]

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Version 1.52 has been submitted to Tawmis for posting at the top of this thread.

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Wow! I can't believe it's been a whole year since I first released my silly little "Betrayal In Antara" project (a culmination in itself of work over the previous 12 years!).

Add to that, this post thread has received over 12,000 views in that time! Of course, half of those views are probably web-crawling spiderbots for search engines and internet archive sites, while the other half are me posting my update notices...

Many thanks to all who have taken the time to read this PDF document, and I hope you enjoyed it.

This version includes the following updates for the Expanded Cutscene sections (Prologue/Chapter Starts & Ends/Epilogue):

• Correctly denoted part of sentence as not being original text (Ch 7 End)
• Corrected game text transcription typo ("and" to "a") (Chapter 7 End)
• Various further editorial revisions throughout these Expanded Cutscenes


This document can also be found at the Larry Laffer website:

www.larrylaffer.net

And as always, thank you for your interest in this project.

[Tawmis]

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Version 1.52 has been submitted to Tawmis for posting at the top of this thread.

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Wow! I can't believe it's been a whole year since I first released my silly little "Betrayal In Antara" project (a culmination in itself of work over the previous 12 years!).

Add to that, this post thread has received over 12,000 views in that time! Of course, half of those views are probably web-crawling spiderbots for search engines and internet archive sites, while the other half are me posting my update notices...

Many thanks to all who have taken the time to read this PDF document, and I hope you enjoyed it.

This version includes the following updates for the Expanded Cutscene sections (Prologue/Chapter Starts & Ends/Epilogue):

• Correctly denoted part of sentence as not being original text (Ch 7 End)
• Corrected game text transcription typo ("and" to "a") (Chapter 7 End)
• Various further editorial revisions throughout these Expanded Cutscenes


This document can also be found at the Larry Laffer website:

www.larrylaffer.net

And as always, thank you for your interest in this project.

Did ye PM it to me? I don't see anywhere to grab the update?

[goatmeal]

Did ye PM it to me? I don't see anywhere to grab the update?

Ugh, as many times as I goof this up, you'd think I'd learn by now...

...Nope, 'cause I'm a dummy!

(Has a message composed and everything, but I guess I didn't send it last night.)

Just sent you the PM. Thanks for your help.

[Tawmis]

Did ye PM it to me? I don't see anywhere to grab the update?

Ugh, as many times as I goof this up, you'd think I'd learn by now...

...Nope, 'cause I'm a dummy!

(Has a message composed and everything, but I guess I didn't send it last night.)

Just sent you the PM. Thanks for your help.

First post updated and LSL site updated.

[goatmeal]

First post updated and LSL site updated.

Thank you, Tawmis!

[Tawmis]

First post updated and LSL site updated.

Thank you, Tawmis!

Sure! I love the... what is it now... fifth "final" update?

[goatmeal]

Sure! I love the... what is it now... fifth "final" update?

Hey, now.

Make fun of me all you want because I don't know how to send private messages, but back on June 12, 2024, I clearly stated that there will be no more "final updates" for this project:

(And from now on, no more grand statements of any update being 'the last update.' This project will continue to be updated as warranted.)

[Tawmis]

Sure! I love the... what is it now... fifth "final" update?

Hey, now.

Make fun of me all you want because I don't know how to send private messages, but back on June 12, 2024, I clearly stated that there will be no more "final updates" for this project:

(And from now on, no more grand statements of any update being 'the last update.' This project will continue to be updated as warranted.)

[Rath Darkblade]

I look forward to the next "final" draft.

A big, Homer Simpson-sized "Doh!"

You mean this?