Tawmis wrote: ↑Fri Mar 19, 2021 3:34 am
I mean, the ending isn't what I wanted. For sure. My main problem was for 7.5 seasons, we have this incredible build up. Then suddenly that 8th season - they rushed everything. Whereas before we could spend eight episodes of Jon traveling from one town to another - we see it happen instantly. "I am leaving for Town_A, 500 miles away." (Next scene, Jon rides into Town_A).
That ... makes no sense. None. (It only makes a kind of sense in a game like "The Elder Scrolls". Insta-travel!)
All right, granted, i'm writing a story now where my MC (Main Character) struggles the whole time through to leave ancient Italy and sail for Egypt. *nod* By the time he has the power to do this, the story is nearly over - but he still has a task to carry out in Egypt.
Is it OK, then, to condense the Italy-to-Egypt voyage into a couple of sentences (e.g. "they get on the boat" and "they arrive"?) The Italy-to-Egypt voyage is about 14 days long, but my story is very long as it is. So I'm afraid that, if I tack this on as well, it could bore the readers.

What do you think?
Tawmis wrote: ↑Fri Mar 19, 2021 3:34 am
The 8th episode - someone, who way back when is eluded to will probably go crazy - is shown for 7.5 seasons as being a symbol for people, a sign of hope - and boom - last season? She goes from sane, symbol, strength, to utterly weak, utterly insane, and utterly paranoid and ruined one of the greatest characters of the series with a snap of the finger. I'd be fine with the character fulfilling that whole insanity thing - but a build up to it would be nice. Slowly show signs of that paranoia and madness.
Ah. *nods* Yes, I'd never seen GoT or read the books, but I understand what you mean. His character is built up over 7.5 seasons to represent strength and sanity, and then it suddenly represents weakness and insanity -
the exact opposite - just like that? That's not how characters work! No, no, no!! *shakes head*
There has to be a reason why. Let's see ... maybe we could have seen a gradual deterioration in the character's mind as the constant bickering and political manuevering takes its toll. Or -- and I'm just throwing out ideas here, since I'd never seen the show -- maybe he sends his friend on a quest and the friend dies, and the character thinks it's his fault. MAYBE. Or, maybe, a trusted friend turns against him. Or maybe all together!

Or ... thing is, there are endless possibilities. But any one of them is better than no explanation at all. And for the best results, it has to be a
gradual process, one incident piling on top of another, until -- like dominoes -- the defenses of his mind come tumbling down.
I'm not sure if any of these things happen in GoT (e.g. betrayal, loss of a friend etc.) -- but any of them, or all of them, would mean the character arc makes more sense. *nod*